Constructive Criticism Needed - First CYO!

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Hello There

So I tried my first ever CYO today and I want Constrictive Criticism, which means tell me what is wrong with it so I can improve! I have two of them, so please take the time to help


First Ever CYO;


First Outfit;

*Pose for this outfit was got here

Thank you

[cat58]

Hi there, and congratulations on making your first cyo!

Just fyi, the official C&C thread is here.

Smooth out the edges a bit, and the shading on the gray dress doesn't look quite natural. You're off to a good start.

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Originally Posted by cat58

Hi there, and congratulations on making your first cyo!

Just fyi, the official C&C thread is here.

Smooth out the edges a bit, and the shading on the gray dress doesn't look quite natural. You're off to a good start.

My bad

Thanks I'll work on edges & shading!

[broken_strings]

the shading on the blue dress is very good for a beginner!

p.s thank you for the the link to the old diva, I've been looking everywhere for it

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Originally Posted by Zubaida_2001

the shading on the blue dress is very good for a beginner!

p.s thank you for the the link to the old diva, I've been looking everywhere for it

Thank you

No problem! I thought people might want it *wink*

[broken_strings]

Originally Posted by roller-skates

Thank you

No problem! I thought people might want it *wink*

Your welcome

[retrobarbie]

My advice is to not shade around the legs and to subtly highlight on top of them. and as for the boob shading, i tend to use the light/darken tool to shade an ellipses around that area.
but also smooth out the edges and shade them too, there are some great tutorials on here you can check out!

But i think for a first go its really good! xxx